Today, I checked the document I made for New Love Abroad’s first draft so that I could see all of the comments that my editor left me two days ago. One of them stuck out to me while I was scrolling through the entire doc:
The time skips are abrupt and confusing.
Until now, I thought the story was flowing nicely, but this is an issue that I hadn’t noticed before. Right now, I’m unsure of what kind of solution there may be to fixing this.
Also, I recently unpublished NLA on Wattpad so I wouldn’t feel guilty about not updating it. If this is the reason why readers might have been losing interest in my story, then it looks like I still have a lot of work to do.
Has anyone else encountered such an issue in their story? What did you do to resolve it? Tell me in the comments section.